"Angel" My first love poem

Midnighter
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"Angel" My first love poem Jan 21, 2009 15:04:33 GMT -5

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Post by Midnighter on Jan 21, 2009 15:04:33 GMT -5

I wander through the day,
My feet walking on air,
Dreaming of my Angel,
The one so beautiful and fair.
This radiant Angel of mine,
That the good Lord doth bestow,
On one as unworthy as me,
How it happened, I don't know.

Nonetheless I am eternally grateful,
So lost in my wander and bliss,
For every now and again,
She'll grace me with a kiss.
My loving, caring Angel,
Who's wing protect me from fears,
My sweet, gentle Angel,
Who's feathers wipe my tears.

She's always there for me,
Through the good times and the bad,
She's my funny little Angel,
The Goddess I never had.
But, now I do and she's with me,
And though she's always far away,
She knows that in my heart,
There's always a place for her to stay.

By: Chukwudi Onyewuenyi

Last Edit: Jan 22, 2009 22:21:41 GMT -5 by Midnighter

[glow=purple,2,300][shadow=purple,left,300]" No one can make you feel inferior without your consent."

-Eleanor Roosevelt[/shadow][/glow]

Dan New Member Posts: 94	"Angel" My first love poem Jan 21, 2009 15:07:05 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Dan on Jan 21, 2009 15:07:05 GMT -5 I opened this expecting a poem...and got this.

Amry Moderator CWC Library Administrator Posts: 41	"Angel" My first love poem Jan 21, 2009 15:07:30 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Amry on Jan 21, 2009 15:07:30 GMT -5 Kind of poetic in and of itself.

Gillian Administrator Posts: 143	"Angel" My first love poem Jan 21, 2009 15:11:50 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Gillian on Jan 21, 2009 15:11:50 GMT -5 Sarah. This. Is. lame. haha

Amry Moderator CWC Library Administrator Posts: 41	"Angel" My first love poem Jan 21, 2009 15:16:40 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Amry on Jan 21, 2009 15:16:40 GMT -5 What's lame?

Gillian
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"Angel" My first love poem Jan 21, 2009 18:29:31 GMT -5

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Post by Gillian on Jan 21, 2009 18:29:31 GMT -5

Wait.

What?

I didn't mean to post on this. Oh my god! I'M SORRY! I DON'T THINK THIS IS LAME! I AM SO SO SORRY!

I meant to post this on Sarah's post "Today is the day" (I think). The one that was one sentance.

Aaah, I am so sorry!!!

Midnighter Junior Member Life is Good Posts: 224	"Angel" My first love poem Jan 21, 2009 19:11:10 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Midnighter on Jan 21, 2009 19:11:10 GMT -5 I wrote this about a year ago
	[glow=purple,2,300][shadow=purple,left,300]" No one can make you feel inferior without your consent." -Eleanor Roosevelt[/shadow][/glow]

Dan
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"Angel" My first love poem Jan 21, 2009 22:01:51 GMT -5

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Post by Dan on Jan 21, 2009 22:01:51 GMT -5

I know I posted in another topic, the same one Gillian is talking about. That's weird how my post randomly ended up here.

Anyway, I liked your poem. It flowed nicely; the meter, which is sometimes the hardest part, was relitivly even. Your rhymes were clean too, which I guess helps the whole romantic kinda theme of the poem.

Good stuff; you should post more when you write it, or if you have more.

Midnighter Junior Member Life is Good Posts: 224	"Angel" My first love poem Jan 22, 2009 14:50:14 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Midnighter on Jan 22, 2009 14:50:14 GMT -5 I'm sorry the "Today's the day" post was accidental, i meant to click preview. My "Todays the day" poem will be posted soon. "Here i am" or whatever i wrote wasn't the actual poem
	[glow=purple,2,300][shadow=purple,left,300]" No one can make you feel inferior without your consent." -Eleanor Roosevelt[/shadow][/glow]

Midnighter Junior Member Life is Good Posts: 224	"Angel" My first love poem Jan 22, 2009 15:32:01 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Midnighter on Jan 22, 2009 15:32:01 GMT -5 I posted today is the day, not sarah.
	[glow=purple,2,300][shadow=purple,left,300]" No one can make you feel inferior without your consent." -Eleanor Roosevelt[/shadow][/glow]

cobaltwolf92 Fresh Meat We sing, we dance, we hunt things Posts: 45	"Angel" My first love poem Jan 22, 2009 18:57:49 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by cobaltwolf92 on Jan 22, 2009 18:57:49 GMT -5 This is lovely. I'm glad you've found someone that makes you feel this way.
	"I wish people were more like animals. Animals don't try to change you or make you fit in. They just enjoy the pleasure of your company. Animals aren't conditional about friendships. Animals like you just the way you are. They listen to your problems, they comfort you when you're sad, and all they ask in return is a little kindness." - Calvin.

Midnighter Junior Member Life is Good Posts: 224	"Angel" My first love poem Jan 22, 2009 19:33:55 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Midnighter on Jan 22, 2009 19:33:55 GMT -5 unfortunately my angel is imaginary (for the time being)
	[glow=purple,2,300][shadow=purple,left,300]" No one can make you feel inferior without your consent." -Eleanor Roosevelt[/shadow][/glow]

Gillian Administrator Posts: 143	"Angel" My first love poem Jan 24, 2009 10:19:59 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Gillian on Jan 24, 2009 10:19:59 GMT -5 Oh my god. I'm sorry. XD God, I'm good, aren't I? sorry, sorry. I think you should really invest in these love poems. Start writing stuff every day, editing old stuff. You really good at this.

Midnighter Junior Member Life is Good Posts: 224	"Angel" My first love poem Apr 1, 2009 18:23:01 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Midnighter on Apr 1, 2009 18:23:01 GMT -5 [glow=purple,2,300][shadow=purple,left,300]Where'd all the good people go? [/shadow][/glow]
	[glow=purple,2,300][shadow=purple,left,300]" No one can make you feel inferior without your consent." -Eleanor Roosevelt[/shadow][/glow]